Before I make this review, please don't defend your song with "i made it really fast" when you respond to this. I'm not going to lower my standard for your because you made it fast. Regardless of the time it took, a good song is still a good song, and a bad song is still a bad song.
That said, the lack of any substantial amount of time spent on this is fairly evident. You just used stock samples that come with FL3. The scratchy thing in the background is pretty cool, that's all I'll give you credit for though. There is a serious lack of content in this, and the main vocals have nothing to do with the song and are really loud, dry, and out of place. I don't hear any sort of effects on any of the 3 sounds you used. No sidechain, no compression, everything's panned center, and I'm sure you couldn't be bothered to EQ (although it doesn't really matter in this instance since there is no audible sub)
1.5/5