OK, so I like this track. A few thoughts on this:
-I really like how upbeat it is! The upbeat synth and the kick combined with the clap in the buildup make it feel really bouncy. Good job with that :D
-You put a huge emphasis on the synths and the mid-high range. This made it sound really melodic and nice! But on the downside...
-There's not much a bassline. Like, at all. You really need the bass and the sub bass range to give it heaviness. This is especially true of trap. Even upbeat trap.
-Speaking of trap, this lacks some of elements that make trap, well, trap! Things like 808 kicks and high hat rolls. (you know, those hats that sound like a sprinkler) The only thing that makes me know this is trap (besides you saying so) is the snare.
-The mixing is pretty good! Nothing unique or special, but it's still well done. No muddiness, everything is panned well.
-This song has a lot of movement. It's really upbeat, and there's no part in the song where I was bored or disinterested.
Overall, you got some nice stuff, but some key elements are missing here. 4/5 though, good job, and GL in the NGADM! ;)